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owais : Be good, Do good Notorious birds

Notorious birds

Posted on May 28th, 2008 by owais : Be good, Do good owais
swarm of birds with shrilling chirrups
enters into calm lush green trees
crispy cool breezes bracing them
utterly bath into refreshing sun rays

notorious agile birds breaking peace
abruptly twitching, plucking, swinging on supple branches
scuddling furtively here and there
as if playing Hide & Seek
causing tress to enrapture and thrills by

from top of perch rolling tiny gleaming eyes
suddenly alight and promptly ceases by its beak
get back to babies to feed

some keep strolling on grasses
exhibiting their enchanting walks
sternly scouring through & meditatively pick by its beak
briskly flying near by waters
sipping and begin flirting with waters too

few hiding into lonely trees
making loves in bewitching morning
with sun's rise, prepare their launch away

bading farewell when sun is high
amain leave back trees into her stillness.
                                                                 
                                                                                -OWAIS

this poem " Notorious birds " has genuinely concieved & devised by myself only, Hence please do not attempt to imitate for sale without my kind consent please do not.
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Nicole : lovelightsinger
7 minutes later
Nicole said

notoriously agile… beautiful!

owais : Be good, Do good
15 minutes later
owais said

Namaste Nicolejee and much gratitudes ,

I thank you so much for always putting your good words upon my writings, thank you again nicolejee.

Many Many Best wishes and lots many loves and good thoughts to your way sincerely, be blessed and happy always dear loving being !

Centria : Full Moon
about 1 hour later
Centria said

It brings the reader to India with the lovely exotic birdsong….

owais : Be good, Do good
about 15 hours later
owais said

Namaste Centriajee and Much blessings to you ,

I Thank you for stopping by on my poem, I hope so. thank you
well centriajee I love to write poems, so if you wish you can visit my other poems here, thank you ,

Mustard farms

a girl in viel

a poem of summer

Unfortunates

Love across the seven seas

street kids

To keep loving someone but is not my sin

where is my childhood gone …..

O Farland Fishy …..,

Satya-Seer : Authenticrat
about 19 hours later
Satya-Seer said

And yet, another beautiful poem.  My imagination brings me to these birds and I can smell the land and await the sun to rise.  Thank you for these beautiful images.

owais : Be good, Do good
about 20 hours later
owais said

Much blessings and gratitudes to you johnjee sincerely ,

I thank you again, yet another comment by you dear friend, thank you.

Have a great and much healthier day and rejoice your day with ur bashuri !

Farland : almost human
about 22 hours later
Farland said

I love this one too! Thank you. Could you tell about the process of writin the poems. How do the idea's come to you and how the writing goes.

owais : Be good, Do good
about 23 hours later
owais said

Much Blessings and mickle of gratitudes to you wondrous farlandjee multitudely ,

well farlandjee I am so happiest to see your compliment after a protracted period, farlandjee I wanted to drop you a line with enquiry Is everything going healthier ? but then everyday just keep procrastinating to next days. Thank you so much for putting your lovely words upon my poem. your compliment do made me happy rather. thank you farlandjee and so happy you love my poems.

sure, offcourse why not ? I do put them below,

honest and pure loves for things which you aim on creating,
a pensive mind and protract persistent muse,
the truth thoughts and loving heart
the stillness of self,
the silence of environment,
the honest self,     
                                          
these all just conjure you up with creative ideas because when I write my poems I feel like above poured down my ideas.

Wishing you a blessed and much happier n healthier life !

Bluewater : Janie
1 day later
Bluewater said

This is so darling Owaisjee…beautifully written. Can't wait for the next one :)

owais : Be good, Do good
1 day later
owais said

Namaste Janiejee and many blessings to u,

thank you for lovely n sweet compliment as usual, it is sweet of u that u put always ur energising n kind words upon my writings, thank you again.

sending ur way many prays and lightnesses briskly, wish you always dwell in purity of loves and peacefulnesses n bliss !

victoria : B* R* E* A* T* H* E, you are Alive!
1 day later
victoria said

“agile bird breaking peace…leave back tree into her stillness”

Absolutely AWESOME & in it's  entirety a sumptuous description of the lush nature that is Mother India !

we have waited awhile for this new poem & are richly rewarded for our patience.  The greatest reward is to be your friend & recieve your many generous gifts !

1<3  victoria

owais : Be good, Do good
2 days later
owais said

Namaste victoriajee and my many numerous blessings & gratitudes to you sincerely,

I owe my hearted thank you's to you repeatedly for complimenting so lavishly sweet, perhaps your compliments upon my writings are always beautiful, written with so much heart, and much exhortating me to write more inway reflecting your genial, much friendly and compassionate divinity.

well, onething alone stands to prove how big heart and how giving heart you have but since you stopped me to reveal so wonot, but wise can understand clearly how great you are indeed, yes you are blessing to gaia as well as a lover of Auroville. victoriajee your compliments are really very touching and very energising, thank you so much for complimenting me with so much heart which only reflects your greatness and purity of heart infact, May God Blesses you highly and widely, thank you dear friend once again multitudely.

I wish always you keep ascent likewise in contentment, loves, peace and wisdom and likewise keep spreading your light of ONELOVE across the Earth and be dwell in everybody's hearts and prays and blessings, May purity of loves and richness of peace and wisdoms enthrall you highly, many many prays to your way, indian vibes and much greetings !
I BOW TO YOUR PURE CLEAN DIVINITY DWELL BY YOU N TOUCHES UR FEET TO SHOW U MUCH RESPECTS, GRATITUDES N MY REVERENCE FOR YOU.

HAVE GREAT DAY N MUCH HEALTHIER ALSO

  -OWAIS

sawinder : Lover of humanity !
5 days later
sawinder said

My God you are a genius !! 

owais : Be good, Do good
5 days later
owais said

Sawinderjee namaskar and much blessings to you,

bhaijee, bahut bahut dhanyavaad. yaar tune toh mujhe kuch zyada hi keh diya, lol mai genius nahi hoon, main toh tere jaisa ek aam insaan hoon, yaar bahut bahut dhanyavaad, mujhe bahut accha laga tune itne acche words likhe main khush hua inse, main toh tere khusyon ke liye bas dua karta hoon, tujhe pata hai tu ek nek insan hai dost, dhanyavaad mere dost compliment ke liye.

hamesha tu khush rahe, hamesha tu sukh-santi mein rahe aur ek santoshjanak jivan jeeta rahen ! 

victoria : B* R* E* A* T* H* E, you are Alive!
5 days later
victoria said

These are incredibly gorgeous, flowing &  magical  words !–I can  (almost)  understand them–& most CERTAINLY the  waves of love & gratefulness they  are radiating ! I love tasting your language here today …

bahut bahut dhanyavaad,

Namaskar !

owais : Be good, Do good
5 days later
owais said

wow cool, so awesome & sweet of you victoriajee you recognised n understand hindi clearly.

humein bahut khushi hui victoriajee ki aap ko hindi itni jyada pasand hai, aise bhi aap bahut bahut acchi, bahut pyar karne wali, aur bahut dilwali aurat hai. main toh wakai bahut khush hoon aap jaisa dost pakar, yeh toh meri khushnasibi hai ki aap jaise mahan log mere dost hai, agar aap samajh sakti hai saf, saf toh mai agli baar se aapko hindi mein hi likhoonga aur hindi mein hi baatein karoonga. par mujhe wakai bahut khushi hoti hai aap ke messages dekh kar. bahut bahut dhanyavaad aap hamesa acchi baatein likhtee hai hamare posts par jiske liye mai hamesha aap ka bahut bahut abhari rahoonga sadev rahoonga, main bas yehi aap ke liye chahata hoon ki aap hamesha bahut bahut zyada khush aur shant rahein aur ek bahut anandamevya tatha santoshjanak jeevan yvateet kare. bahut bahut dhanyavaad, o atulya prempurvak atma mera bahut bahut aashirvaad aapko.

sawinder : Lover of humanity !
7 days later
sawinder said

… YOu know what MR. Owais I have been reading your poems lately ( havent read all yet )
PAR Beta, whatever YOu write really well …I mean I am envious yaar  !..hahah
.Thanx for all the belssings you have given ..same to you same to you …anyways YOu are sure to develop into one of the GEMS of our society ..for SURE ..I can feel that …

AUR ek baat be a natural aam admi as you are BUT dont be like me …Are bhaiya mein to sardar hoon !!..heheh ….blessings

owais : Be good, Do good
7 days later
owais said

LOL, dhanyavaad sardarjee, please do not be a envious but yes you can change in a positive way by aspiring that and shall endeavor toilingly those traits, because being covetous will lead you into restlessness of mind and peace of atma, dhanyavaad. yaar asha karta hoon ki meri salah buri nahi lagi aur please offend mat karna.

mujhe badi khushi hai tujhse dosti karke aur itni acchi baatein hamesha likhta hai mere liye, dhanyavaad. yaar main aaj ek nayi poem post karoonga, please padhna dost, mera pyar tatha aashirwaads tujhko dost.

yaffie : yaffinity
9 days later
yaffie said

very beautiful owaisjee! I can see, feel, and smell the scent and watch all activity as i bask in the sunshine..

owais : Be good, Do good
10 days later
owais said

I owe my mickle of thank you's earnestly for putting your lovely words on my poem, thank you so much yaffajee, my much loves and many blessings to you.

many lightness, happiness and peace shall always bestow in your life by the grace of God and by the grace of so pure, authentic divinity dwell within you !

yaffajee you are also blessing and an incredible wise poet n writer, much enjoyed ur poems and loved them, thank you so much.

yaffie : yaffinity
10 days later
yaffie said

As I yours owais!! And I will continue to glean more from you…Meanwhile since you so love mine, I will add more…

owais : Be good, Do good
11 days later
owais said

Namaste dear sweet yaffajee

hey thank you so much, I did enjoy and relish enormously by your wonderful madonna. you create so much beauty on the subject itself. you are really terrific and much beautiful at imaginations and rich with vocabularies. your poems so provocative rather. loved ur poems.

many many glories and many my loves to you !
many light and peace to you !

much blessings n gratitudes multitudely to you dear yaffajee !

yaffie : yaffinity
12 days later
yaffie said

owaisjee!!

thank you for your eloguent praise!!
Soiled Madonna provocative?? I didn't see it like that at all!! It was meant to be a commentary on women who use men and who hop from bed to bed -playing house and then taking each other for a ride and dumping one another..perverting and exploiting sexuality for power and gain, money and favors..I never meant for it to be provocative, i meant it to be light!! Maybe i didn't make my point?? lol..

Also, I loved your other poem, its not my sin which i commented on…

owais : Be good, Do good
12 days later
owais said

pranam Yaffajee,

you are lol, sweet lol I did not mean to say only madonna but implying all other exhortating poems of you, see what all compliments I attribute upon your poem is exclusively based upon emotions, feelings, enraptures, transition thoughts and fancies conjure up to me. I do mix every of my feelings whilst writing or complimenting upon people's works. this is why people genarally find owais speaks too much but honestly they all are related with people's nature. when I write I think just my messages makes following people very happy and very energetic and feel being loved n embraced, thank you.

my many loves and light to you !
my much endearments and best-wishes to you !
always remain blissful n prosperous !

lol, your poems are provocative, i know i did attribute many compliments upon your poems but they do congruently contains, thank you. trust me you are an incredible much wondrous writer, i love very much widely what you write.

   -OWAIS

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